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SMV: Lyra's Arrival 4

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Eugh, crosshatch brush from photoshop I want to believe in you but you're not working quite well yet.
Anyway, this is the last page of this section.
Previous: [link]
Each page I get less and less sure about writing Calliope's dialect.

Brushes used by :iconnekochuni:, :icondidimarra:, :iconkabocha:, :icondidimarra:, :iconasifalittlezonked: and :iconkessir:
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The establishing shot of your room could have done with a few more colors (or gray tones) on the walls, to balance the patterns on the furniture. This (and backgrounds in general) are great places to experiment with more detailed lineart: maybe add folds to the pillows, shines to the window, and a wooden texture to that drawer. But those brushes...the blanket looks all right I suppose, but the brush you used for the wood panelling is too busy for me!

But otherwise, this comic had a nice overarching story and I like the little cliffhanger you ended it on! Remember the things I've pointed out and work on them, and I think it'll help your art match the level of your storytelling. Can't wait to see more comics from you about Calliope!